100wc week9 term 3

Whoosh. I jumped in the air hoping to grab the rope. The lava was coming and I started to scream, heat rushed to my face with each second passing. I jumped again but still missed, the lava was really close and I started to cry.

I jumped. Flying through the air, heat on my face I griped the rope. I was so exhausted from all my attempts that I didn’t have the strength to move. I glanced around trying to find land. I saw some bricks that I could jump to.

 

1, 2, 3… GO!

I went flying, but landed!

3 thoughts on “100wc week9 term 3

  1. Joel, This 100 word challenge is great! You really looked at it differently, in your own way. Just one thing to work on… I think that you should double check your spelling and grammar in some parts, like when you said: ‘Flying through the air, heat on my face I griped the rope.’ You are missing a P in the word gripped, and you repeated ‘heat on my face’ a couple of times and it did not make the most sense, but apart from that, you did awesomely! Keep up the good work!
    Regards, Zezdo23 (Zede XD)

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